After receiving the feedback on my ancillary texts, I found that my first advert didn't make sense to people as the artist was lost in the static. I initially did this to separate her from everything that was happening like I did with my video, but I agreed that she lost her identity as an artist in the advert and this shouldn't happen if I was going for the star image idea. Therefore, I reversed the image to still include the static (linking across my three products) and have my artist being the central image. This still separates her from everything else, showing my concept, but in a different way that makes her identifiable.

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